origami trial layouts + Brochure development

-tried some stuff but still looks kinda weird. Any ideas to make it look better?

i like the white text oppose to the black one. The black colour text looks like it's fighting with the image. Maybe try a serif text? 

-Try the title with a serif typeface? (Adobe caslon pro) if you have it.

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Try a similar layout to the brochure? Maybe have the text overlaying the image? (The image can be bigger?) Try it out if you can!

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-kinda blends in if i overlay the text over it

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more moodboard of japanese designs. some of the similar features they had:

- vertical text

- Overlays (Imagery and text) it makes the design seem somewhat more playful

-although there is a clear grid structure, the components on the page are flowly. 

table layout trials

-reduced spacing between paragraphs- was a bit big

-forgot about the etiquette on the napkins

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iteration 1

iteration 2

iteration 3

iteration 4

Feel free to leave any other suggestions!

-I think the vertical orientation of the kanji could work. You could just change where you put the body text.

everything won't be fitting on here. although the body text size is already pt11 so if i make it any smaller it might be hard to read. should this be A2 instead?

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just wondering whether A2 would be too big to carry around since the brochure is a takeaway component. What size was the text on the food brochure?